Why is there a NPC teleport in the bad cave. and why not a teleport at the exit? it will be much better if the exit teleports you outside.

What about a rare item you can only get that day. the forest bow and desert shirt will lose their rareness... a special item doesnt because you can only get it that day

What about a rare item you can only get that day. the forest bow and desert shirt will lose their rareness... a special item doesnt because you can only get it that day

and some chocolate

I go for C

she sits a little bit odd on that rock

That would be really fun! It will be even more fun if you can show it to others

I like monster 1

version A looks in my opinion a bit TO nature. There must be a big open place where you can fight. (read no trees, just some stones, small statues and flowers as eyecandy) version C is just the opposite. I thinks it looks a bit TO human made. maybe you can make something between version A and versio...

Dont forget some kind of an entrance. It's a very good start!

When walking under a brigde the bridge dissepers, so you can see under it.--sounds like a mapping error. when you tell us the exact location we can fix it.--

I think that he wants that as a feature. So you can see someone who is behind a wall. under the entrance of the city etc...

I like your temple! it looks very good. I can feel the magic that is used to build it

a armor shop

I dont call that a temple... When I think about a temple it must be big, very big. and this thing looks small. also the road to the temple must be very big because many people go to the temple. some eyecany for the road can be big statues etc. at least thats my opinion

I really dont like your dragon/gem sword whatever it is
It's just not my idea of a sword...

Your creature looks really cool

You are really good in concept art