Mana World Proposals

[John P]

This is my user page on the wiki:
http://wiki.themanaworld.org/index.php/User:John_Pyle

This page links to subpage proposals that I have written for The Mana World. Some I have posted previously and some I have not.

I would very much appreciate any comments, suggestions, questions, and criticism on any or all of the pages that I have written. My previous proposals won me a few private messages, two suggesting that I create a user wiki for the proposals.

The pages may conflict with other articles in the wiki, but they provide strong support for future TMW content, such as how magic works and other mana-intense subjects.

Any pages that do conflict I have plans to rewrite based on a basic outline that I have created.

Please please PLEASE give me some feedback either here in this thread or on the respective subpages (each page should have a 'notes' section that you can add a comment to (be sure to timestamp it with ~~~~). Some are short, I promise!

Thank you!

ps. someone once told me that the mana world story needs to be darker, and if people agree, it can get pretty dark (especially with magic and wizards involved). Also the theme of crystals can have a place in the story if this is a loved concept.

[Crush]

I have to admit that I was a bit sceptical at first when I heard that someone who hasn't contributed anything to TMW yet wants to fiddle with the backstory. But then I read your new outline for the prehistory and I liked it very much.

ps. someone once told me that the mana world story needs to be darker, and if people agree, it can get pretty dark (especially with magic and wizards involved).

Not sure who told you that but I don't think so.

[EJlol]

I hope we will have a finished backstory soon.