<-- i almost left it at that. But the fact that your on dial up should not matter. But I would not make your server public this is up to you though. so set the config file map_local, char_local all to 127.0.0.1
If the problem persist i would delete it redo the make steps and if that dose not work maybe you have a firewall blocking it. also make sure all your ports are correct
and to configure the server for only ppl in your house
// Athena Character local configuration file.
// Server Communication username and password.
userid: s1
passwd: p1
// Server name, no more than 19 characters
server_name: The Mana World
// Wisp name for server: used to send wisp from server to players (between 4 to 23 characters)
wisp_server_name: Server
// Login Server IP
login_ip: 127.0.0.1
// Login Server Port
login_port: 6901
// Character Server IP
char_ip:"Your_computers_ip"
<------important try start/run type cmd hit enter type ipconfig the 192.168 number will be the computers ip
// Character Server Port
char_port: 6901
do the same for the map_local