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I plan to make some consumables for an outdoor cafe project. This is the outline of the glass of water (the water is a guide/visual reference): Coffee cup outline: Coffee cup roughly colored version: Other drinks include:

- Soda
- Milk Tea

Foods:

- Cake

- Cookies

- Pie Slice

- Sandwiches

- Muffins

- Bagel

- Taffy

Advice, suggestions, criticism, etc... would be greatly appreciated!

-Dimond

I will work on some of the stuff for graphics

great idea dimond

Regards,

Dimond, you don't give many information about exterior environment

Sunday

Chicka-Maria wrote:Sunday

Don't mean to be a hater, it looks good, but the angle is way off

yeah i realised X_X

im trying to fix that up now

>_> dont know if this makes any difference.

Ill edit it a little more though if it doesnt make a difference. so please comment on it.

and yes im working on the bottom of the cup as well.
ill post the newer update in the sunday tommoro

regards,

Glass of water

Chicka-maria: Looks great! Can't wait 'til you come out with your other version of the ice cream sunday! =)

Merlinx420: Thanks for adjusting the glass of water! It looks just as I imagined it. An idea is that I just realized there are such things as ice cubes in-game! Perhaps we could have ice water. I think it's possible to fit them in if we filled the glass a bit more with water. I made a super-rough attempt at this: It's possible Merlin, and I would greatly appreciate if you would take on this consumable item. =)

Reid: The cup looks interesting... Much better than something I could do.

Everyone: Help will... help! Constructive criticism, comments, ect... Will be considered and appreciated!

-Dimond

to save time i made it into a sunday in a regular bowl. hope this is okay dimond&merlin XD

The bottom should be more round - it's a bit flat - and it needs a dark outline, but otherwise it looks great.

poison_ivy wrote:The bottom should be more round - it's a bit flat - and it needs a dark outline, but otherwise it looks great.

thanks for being encouraging rather then logging on telling the person to learn how to pixel..

I will work on it more.

Chicka-Maria wrote:

poison_ivy wrote:The bottom should be more round - it's a bit flat - and it needs a dark outline, but otherwise it looks great.

thanks for being encouraging rather then logging on telling the person to learn how to pixel..

I will work on it more.

i saw that in your work you used lots of colors.
Generally while doing pixel art try to use less colors, you only need 4 or 5 colors to draw the bowl.

i give you an example

gor wrote:

Chicka-Maria wrote:

poison_ivy wrote:The bottom should be more round - it's a bit flat - and it needs a dark outline, but otherwise it looks great.

thanks for being encouraging rather then logging on telling the person to learn how to pixel..

I will work on it more.

i saw that in your work you used lots of colors.
Generally while doing pixel art try to use less colors, you only need 4 or 5 colors to draw the bowl.

i give you an example

Thanks for the acctual example of showing me in this post rather than critisizing me in game.

Regards,