Harpy Monster
Harpy Monster
não sou bom em inglês.
sou do TMW-Brasil
temos poucos Desenvolvedores, sou novato e gostaria da opinião
de vocês
o que devo melhorar?
http://forums.themanaworld.com.br/viewt ... 2c&start=0
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I'm not good at English.
TMW'm from Brazil-
have few developers, I am beginner and would like the opinion
you
what should I improve?
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http://forums.themanaworld.com.br/viewt ... 2c&start=0
Re: Harpy Monster
iLUS,iLUS wrote:
não sou bom em inglês.
sou do TMW-Brasil
temos poucos Desenvolvedores, sou novato e gostaria da opinião
de vocês
o que devo melhorar?
http://forums.themanaworld.com.br/viewt ... 2c&start=0
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I'm not good at English.
TMW'm from Brazil-
have few developers, I am beginner and would like the opinion
you
what should I improve?
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http://forums.themanaworld.com.br/viewt ... 2c&start=0
It looks great I think, you could continue working on it. Here you are some of my opinions:
- Add one more frame everywhere, it looks a bit slow and not realistic.
- Edit shading on the die frame. Why are this wings black? Shouldn't they be more brighter?
/me thinks, what does he do here...
Cheers, dark
Re: Harpy Monster
iLUS,
It looks great I think, you could continue working on it. Here you are some of my opinions:
Add one more frame everywhere, it looks a bit slow and not realistic.
Edit shading on the die frame. Why are this wings black? Shouldn't they be more brighter?
About translator: No problem, you can use it, we understand you.
/me thinks, what does he do here...
Obrigado pelas dicas
Eu fiz as penas preto para ser mais fácil, lembre-se que há poucos dias eu comecei a aprender ^ ^
nunca tinha feito isso, eu vou olhar para fotos de pássaros para ver o movimento das asas. ^ ^
Estou aqui para aprender e compartilhar ^ ^
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Thanks for the tips
I made the black feathers to be easier, remember that a few days ago I started learning ^ ^
had never done it, I'll look for pictures of birds to see the movement of the wings. ^ ^
I am here to learn and share ^ ^