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não sou bom em inglês.
sou do TMW-Brasil
temos poucos Desenvolvedores, sou novato e gostaria da opinião
de vocês
o que devo melhorar?

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I'm not good at English.
TMW'm from Brazil-
have few developers, I am beginner and would like the opinion
you
what should I improve?

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iLUS wrote:

não sou bom em inglês.
sou do TMW-Brasil
temos poucos Desenvolvedores, sou novato e gostaria da opinião
de vocês
o que devo melhorar?

http://forums.themanaworld.com.br/viewt ... 2c&start=0
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I'm not good at English.
TMW'm from Brazil-
have few developers, I am beginner and would like the opinion
you
what should I improve?

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http://forums.themanaworld.com.br/viewt ... 2c&start=0

iLUS,

It looks great I think, you could continue working on it. Here you are some of my opinions:

• Add one more frame everywhere, it looks a bit slow and not realistic.
• Edit shading on the die frame. Why are this wings black? Shouldn't they be more brighter?

About translator: No problem, you can use it, we understand you.
/me thinks, what does he do here...

Cheers, dark

iLUS,

It looks great I think, you could continue working on it. Here you are some of my opinions:

Add one more frame everywhere, it looks a bit slow and not realistic.
Edit shading on the die frame. Why are this wings black? Shouldn't they be more brighter?


About translator: No problem, you can use it, we understand you.
/me thinks, what does he do here...

Obrigado pelas dicas
Eu fiz as penas preto para ser mais fácil, lembre-se que há poucos dias eu comecei a aprender ^ ^
nunca tinha feito isso, eu vou olhar para fotos de pássaros para ver o movimento das asas. ^ ^

Estou aqui para aprender e compartilhar ^ ^
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Thanks for the tips
I made the black feathers to be easier, remember that a few days ago I started learning ^ ^
had never done it, I'll look for pictures of birds to see the movement of the wings. ^ ^

I am here to learn and share ^ ^