New NPC [FND] & [wip]
New NPC [FND] & [wip]
Irukard I used your tags from http://forums.themanaworld.org/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=8568
I hope you don't mind.
I hope you don't mind.
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Re: New NPC [FND]
What is it?
It doesn't got any shape, any texture exept an etra dithering on the right side and.. why did you greyscaled it?
Oh, and why this dark outline on his head?
And light direction is wrong D:
It doesn't got any shape, any texture exept an etra dithering on the right side and.. why did you greyscaled it?
Oh, and why this dark outline on his head?
And light direction is wrong D:
"Time is an illusion. Lunchtime doubly so."
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Re: New NPC [FND]
Everything that Reid said. I wouldn't consider this quite finished.
Tags like this will not be used for NPCs, but take note anyway that the font you are supposed to use for them is Silkscreen.
Tags like this will not be used for NPCs, but take note anyway that the font you are supposed to use for them is Silkscreen.
Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]
Starting to get better but I don't think the flashy blue is a good choice. I think that this NPC first needs a more human flesh color, he looks like a man cutten from a black & white photo. Furthermore, the main color of this NPC should turn around brown, well that is pretty what I think except its cape, it really needs to stick out behind his back because at the moment, it doesn't seem it is really a cap.
Hope I helped,
Ali-G
Hope I helped,
Ali-G
Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]
First... read my signature.Ali-G wrote:Starting to get better but I don't think the flashy blue is a good choice. I think that this NPC first needs a more human flesh color, he looks like a man cutten from a black & white photo. Furthermore, the main color of this NPC should turn around brown, well that is pretty what I think except its cape, it really needs to stick out behind his back because at the moment, it doesn't seem it is really a cap.
Hope I helped,
Ali-G
He has a mask on and it is still being worked on."I think that this NPC first needs a more flesh color"
except its cape, it really needs to stick out behind his back because at the moment, it doesn't seem it is really a cap.
seems you could tell it was a cape... enough said.
Ali-G I'm not looking for suggestions. (telling you this not trying to be a dick)
Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]
The mask isn't visible enoughtmeway wrote:Update
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Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]
feel free to alter it.
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Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]
meway wrote:feel free to alter it.
Its your npc! Do the job yourself or stop posting updates if you dont wanting suggestions... Like me xD damn englisch.. I hate it xDDD
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Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]
I post to provide not satisfy
Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]
I just point the thing that you could improuve, isn't that the job of a graphics dev forum?I don't give a cookie if you do them or not, and don't ask me to touch at that ^^ My answer will always be a no.
"Time is an illusion. Lunchtime doubly so."
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