Dark Knights Helm

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Dark Knights Helm

Post by Bankai777 » 06 Jul 2008, 02:36

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this is my helm can some1 make a inv image for it?
plz comment on it
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Re: Dark Knights Helm

Post by Crush » 06 Jul 2008, 04:09

It looks very dark. Try to give it a bit more contrast.

I also noticed a lot of slightly transparent stray pixels.

Regarding the shape: I would have to see it on a character to judge it properly.
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Re: Dark Knights Helm

Post by Bankai777 » 06 Jul 2008, 06:37

i based it off normal knights helm and i used gimps smudge for the contrast really n00by stuff sorry but its better then some of my other work which shall remain hidden hopefuly within the pages of this forum ill work on the charicter now
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Re: Dark Knights Helm

Post by Bankai777 » 06 Jul 2008, 07:22

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here you go sir i hope you like it
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Re: Dark Knights Helm

Post by Bankai777 » 06 Jul 2008, 07:27

Crush wrote:It looks very dark. Try to give it a bit more contrast.

I also noticed a lot of slightly transparent stray pixels.

Regarding the shape: I would have to see it on a character to judge it properly.
sir i will improve it more
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Re: Dark Knights Helm

Post by Bankai777 » 06 Jul 2008, 07:43

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im sorry sir i think i made it worse i smudged in a purple for the dark effect i dont think it helped... but i tried i still have the older copy

sorry for the 4 post
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Re: Dark Knights Helm

Post by Shaggy » 06 Jul 2008, 10:26

here you go sir
sir i will improve it more
im sorry sir
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Re: Dark Knights Helm

Post by Bankai777 » 06 Jul 2008, 18:02

shhhhh i want to be forgiven soon for a past mistake
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Re: Dark Knights Helm

Post by Atmolaguuna » 07 Jul 2008, 02:24

For the Sword: Dimensions should be 32 x 32, not 67 x 77. Give it a proper handguard and a pommel, and don't use pure black. (I don't get why a thieve owuld use a sword, though... daggers would make more sense.)
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Re: Dark Knights Helm

Post by Bankai777 » 07 Jul 2008, 03:13

*sigh* that was the mistake
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Re: Dark Knights Helm

Post by Atmolaguuna » 07 Jul 2008, 03:26

I would try to help but... I'm not good with helmets. It looks alright to me...
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Re: Dark Knights Helm

Post by Bankai777 » 07 Jul 2008, 04:40

thank you!
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Re: Dark Knights Helm

Post by Rotonen » 07 Jul 2008, 09:39

I'd just start from scratch with the helmet and keep it as a reminder for later usage.

Also however cool you might consider black to be, it is not the color to begin learning with.
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Re: Dark Knights Helm

Post by Bankai777 » 07 Jul 2008, 18:40

i understand sir
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Re: Dark Knights Helm

Post by Rotonen » 08 Jul 2008, 00:09

So where's the second attempt at the helmet? :evil:
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