Hi,
any further progress on the archer? The most recent sprite is mostly solid (except for the bow outline and the clothes' shading), but the pose isn't very exciting.
It doesn't have to be as fancy as Don's knight pose, but some slight variation as in the following might make it more exciting already:
(Note that the bow isn't fully outlined in that picture either.)
-- fate
[WIP] Archer NPC
Re: [WIP] Archer NPC
Hi,
nowhere as interesting as Don's knight, but that knight would be hard to top:
Any thoughts?
I may have overdone the alphaing of the bow in some parts, in particular, and not left enough contrast for it.
-- fate
nowhere as interesting as Don's knight, but that knight would be hard to top:
Any thoughts?
I may have overdone the alphaing of the bow in some parts, in particular, and not left enough contrast for it.
-- fate
Re: [WIP] Archer NPC
It looks good fate! I especially like the non-MPS0 pose (as you coined it) and the hair.
As for the bow (it’s at an angle/rotated, hooray!) and the hand holding it, I see nothing wrong with it from a grip-point of view, though as the (pixels of the) hand does not extend on the outside of the bow it looks like the hand is phasing through the bow. A minor detail to me, but maybe what SpamMaster sees as holding the bow from the inside?
Good work!
Smallprint: Personally the eyes (and head?) are bit on the too big side for my individual taste, but I’m only mentioning it with a tiny font size, so disregard this comment as anything useful.
As for the bow (it’s at an angle/rotated, hooray!) and the hand holding it, I see nothing wrong with it from a grip-point of view, though as the (pixels of the) hand does not extend on the outside of the bow it looks like the hand is phasing through the bow. A minor detail to me, but maybe what SpamMaster sees as holding the bow from the inside?
Good work!
Smallprint: Personally the eyes (and head?) are bit on the too big side for my individual taste, but I’m only mentioning it with a tiny font size, so disregard this comment as anything useful.
Re: [WIP] Archer NPC
Yes,
Keep it up, both of you!
Regards,
Keep it up, both of you!
Regards,
Re: [WIP] Archer NPC
Is fate get better.
Biogovox
Biogovox
Re: [WIP] Archer NPC
I really like this archer fate
"Too much of a good thing is an awesome thing, but too much of an awesome thing is, um, really really dumb. And bad." Strong Bad
Re: [WIP] Archer NPC
Hi,
thank you for the feedback! Here is some fine-tuning to address some of your concerns: I've tried to desmudge the bow, adjusted its shape a little bit, and gave it a darker outline. I also tried to improve the right hand a bit.
--fate
thank you for the feedback! Here is some fine-tuning to address some of your concerns: I've tried to desmudge the bow, adjusted its shape a little bit, and gave it a darker outline. I also tried to improve the right hand a bit.
--fate
Re: [WIP] Archer NPC
That looks quite fetching, fate!fate wrote:Hi,
thank you for the feedback! Here is some fine-tuning to address some of your concerns: I've tried to desmudge the bow, adjusted its shape a little bit, and gave it a darker outline. I also tried to improve the right hand a bit.
--fate