Interesting idea. Will look interesting ingame and be quite easy to animate despite its size.
It just suffers a lot from [pillow shading]. I would also make the tentacles in deeper layers darker to give it more depth.
And then a creative suggestion: how about adding eyes? But this is just a suggestion. Let's see how long it takes until someone mentions either tentacle hentai or the flying spaghetti monster
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If the idea like, I can work shadows and animation, I don't know about the eyes I still have doubs about that. may be because ive seen too many round-like-crab eyes, but if anyone have an idea we can work with that...
And now, EJlol, press "quote" next to my first post and read what I wrote in font size 1.
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seriously, change the colour to something dark-purplish going into mauve with slightly dark but vivid green eyes/accents would be my first move. so far I can't get over the first impression of it looking like a doodie, it's like getting a known comedy actor in a serious film, you know he's all serious but it just makes you laugh even harder deep inside seeing him/her try.
By this I mean not to offend your initiative, which is most admirable, but rather to push you into finishing your concepts further before starting new ones or discarding old ones.
Rotonen: I'm aware of your advice but this is the way I find new things, may be must of them are really bad, but once in a while I find a good idea or a good idea for somebody else
BTW, thank you for your comments I don't cosider it an offense
I think it should be basic because I need to animate or you thing I'm wrong ? If I do a very complex monster may be I wouldn't be able to create an animation