Rice Hat

[Spit23]

Hi! I was bored today, so I started to make this rice hat.



How do you like it? Please give me some feedback.

[ElvenProgrammer]

Not bad at all, I'd continue working on it.

[GonzoDark]

very nice idea, and it looks good. (I can't give you any advise, but I hope the more skilled artists of this forum can)

// GonzoDark

[Spit23]

I changed it a bit



Please give me more feedback!

[Rotonen]

A fairly solid piece of pixellation.

Why is this not getting proper attention?

I'm not sure about the outline, though.

Welcome aboard.

[Ces]

It looks very nice! Though I must confess that I first saw it as a wooden bowl turn upside-down. Perhaps making the rim narrower, giving it the appearance of a wide, thin, hollow cone? [Wikipedia: Conical straw hat]

I believe the thick rim was what confused me at first, but it could also have been the texture which I find looking like something between wood and straw, not sure what gives me that feeling though.

And welcome to the forums, a nice introduction I dare say!

[Spit23]

Thanks a lot for the comments. Ces I think I understand what you mean, had a similar feeling about it. Now I changed the height which makes the hat wider.

[Bankai777]

hmmm it looks unnatural from the side and also why dont u call it the straw hat?

[DeathKnight]

make it cover the eyes and you've got yourself (if i do say so myself) TEH COOLIEST IT3MZ 1N T3H G4M3Z

[i]

Thanks a lot for the comments. Ces I think I understand what you mean, had a similar feeling about it. Now I changed the height which makes the hat wider.

Indeed, shape looks ok. IMO it is a bit textureless. Also don't be afraid of 8-bit alpha channel. Maybe something like this?

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[Rotonen]

I really like how iru got the structure to be clear. I might be a bit off with this crappy laptop monitor of mine, but the tone choice for the structural highlights could be the point where the potential for improvement still exists.

[i]

I really like how iru got the structure to be clear. I might be a bit off with this crappy laptop monitor of mine, but the tone choice for the structural highlights could be the point where the potential for improvement still exists.

I just made outline thinner, and add some highlight on opacity 30%. It is just cheap trick ;P

[AxlTrozz]

I'm sorry to say this but I think the perspective is a bit off. looks like a front view

The texture is very nice indeed, I would add some brown dark dots on the borders so you can imitate straws.

Shape is good, my advice is to slim it a bit the on borders

[Rotonen]

I simply perceived it as non-round.

[AxlTrozz]

As a matter of illustration in regards of the perspective