[REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
[REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
We need a better image for Lora Tay, the seamstress NPC. She's a middle-aged woman and a great seamstress.
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
How's this?
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The skirt is OK but the top accentuates the breast too much.
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
I like her hair and the skirt, but the blouse/shirt could be better, I think.
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Here she is:
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Definitely better, but I still see a bit too much saturation on the skirt.kr0n05931 wrote:Here she is:
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I love her clothes, but I think the hair style doesn't seem to go too well with them, IMO.
How about long curly hair?
How about long curly hair?
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That doesn't fit her personality too well. I think the clothing colors are still off, and the dress style could be changed a bit: shorter and less flowing.
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Lazy bum.
Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
I had a little crack at our Seamstress as well....
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
I still think her clothing could use some work. Less dressy. maybe some cloth in her hand.
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I think you've chosen a wrong approach to the glasses due to scale. Make them oversize for clarity.
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I think yosuhara's version of Lora Tay is nice, except that the breasts are still over-emphasized.
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The glasses are still a bit small and the thing over her right arm doesn't look appropriate for what she does.