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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 14 Mar 2009, 18:24
by Seradest
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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 15 Mar 2009, 10:02
by kickinyourface
Seradest wrote:An here the first Proto of the Pineapple:

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and here V2
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IMO u should just do a color which is brighter than the first and darker than the second one but it's already a nice work ;)

EDIT: the second version of the fishbone looks better IMO ;)

Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 15 Mar 2009, 11:33
by Seradest
kickinyourface wrote:
Seradest wrote:An here the first Proto of the Pineapple:

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and here V2
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IMO u should just do a color which is brighter than the first and darker than the second one but it's already a nice work ;)

EDIT: the second version of the fishbone looks better IMO ;)
The Pineapple V3:
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And a Onigiri: (http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Categ ... uselang=de)
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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 15 Mar 2009, 11:43
by Rotonen
The onigiri is suffering from your basic angular approach: straight outlines are unnatural. (Especially your tendency for 45 degree angle approximations is something you should work yourself out of.)

In the pineapple you're trying to force too much detail into that tiny space of 1024 pixels. Perhaps making the structural details bigger, but fewer in total would help?

Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 15 Mar 2009, 12:36
by Seradest
Rotonen wrote:The onigiri is suffering from your basic angular approach: straight outlines are unnatural. (Especially your tendency for 45 degree angle approximations is something you should work yourself out of.)

In the pineapple you're trying to force too much detail into that tiny space of 1024 pixels. Perhaps making the structural details bigger, but fewer in total would help?
sorry your english is a bit too hard can you explayn your things easyer ?

Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 16 Mar 2009, 21:23
by Goku
Less detail, but with the few left make them stand out.

Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 16 Mar 2009, 21:53
by Goku
Pineapple V4? :P

Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 16 Mar 2009, 22:11
by EJlol
It's still improving, keep it up :wink:

Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 17 Mar 2009, 05:14
by Fother
Seradest wrote:Image

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I have a flopping fish mob (a fish out of water that's flopping around) about that size I've been working on, and that fish bone is definitely giving me some ideas on it :D. Your great!

Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 17 Mar 2009, 07:15
by Seradest
Fother J wrote:
Seradest wrote:Image

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I have a flopping fish mob (a fish out of water that's flopping around) about that size I've been working on, and that fish bone is definitely giving me some ideas on it :D. Your great!
THX ^^

That was for a fishing Quest Idea but use it.

Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 25 Mar 2009, 15:23
by Seradest
I will make:

A potato
A cuke
A broccoli
A aubergine

Have anyone any ideas ?
i will make the potato in a half.

Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 25 Mar 2009, 19:59
by skipy
Seradest wrote:I will make:

A potato
A cuke
A broccoli
A aubergine

Have anyone any ideas ?
i will make the potato in a half.



the pineapple looks really good. suggestions - corn, tomato, pumpkin, corn, banana, corn.

its what i think

-skipy

Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 25 Mar 2009, 20:29
by Jaxad0127
skipy wrote:corn, tomato, pumpkin, corn, banana, corn
He already made those.

Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 28 Mar 2009, 20:05
by Seradest
my samples for the pixel arts

A potato (i use a dirty potato)
http://img.alibaba.com/photo/10984603/F ... kistan.jpg

A cuke (i use the big )
http://honjii.files.wordpress.com/2008/ ... =267&h=432

A broccoli
http://www.worldcommunitycookbook.org/s ... occoli.jpg

A aubergine
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/c ... ergine.jpg

Its ok i make pixel art from they its not ,then say it.

Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Posted: 28 Mar 2009, 23:02
by Seradest
Ok done ^^

A potato (i use a dirty potato)
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A cuke (i use the big )
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A broccoli
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A aubergine
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