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Posted: 19 Nov 2006, 17:56
by Modanung
Mangamaniac, you might consider drawing the strap over shoulder when the player is looking to the right. No need to though.

Posted: 20 Nov 2006, 13:35
by mangamaniac
NowI now what's looking so weird :D

Maybe I'll finish this in future, but for now it would be just a waste of time, if this is not usable.

Posted: 20 Nov 2006, 16:04
by Platyna
Oh come on megamaniac, we are cooperating here, if people post any suggestions or criticism, it is in positive manner and their goal is to improve your work. So don't be discouraged.

Regards.

Posted: 20 Nov 2006, 22:20
by mangamaniac
No, I'm not this discouraged.

I just don't have much time. I finished the sprites in semester break and now I'm having intermediate examinations, so I need time to learn.

I'll be able to fix it in christmas holidays.

Posted: 26 Nov 2006, 06:00
by Crush
Good news! The female clothing programming is almost finished. The release of mangamaniacs leather top graphics for female characters in the next update is about 99% sure.

Posted: 02 Dec 2006, 15:31
by mangamaniac
I corrected the strap now:

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Posted: 22 Jan 2007, 19:10
by mangamaniac
Hi everybody.
I'm back again and I brought this new skirt idea with me:

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I tried to improve my shading skills a bit and that's the result.

Posted: 23 Jan 2007, 11:34
by D2ARCHER
mangamaniac wrote:Hi everybody.
I'm back again and I brought this new skirt idea with me:

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I tried to improve my shading skills a bit and that's the result.
real good manga!

Posted: 23 Jan 2007, 12:28
by Crush
I think it should be brighter and less saturated.

Posted: 23 Jan 2007, 17:05
by Platyna
You should use green in that brown strip, then it would fit to the shirt, or make a brown skirt to fit to the shirt even better. ;)

Regards.

Posted: 23 Jan 2007, 20:47
by mangamaniac
I think a brown skirt looks too dark, so i tried a light brown version, but it looks like yellow
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This is the original blue skirt with a green strip
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and last but not least a less saturated version (I think it's too much like violet)
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Posted: 23 Jan 2007, 23:53
by Platyna
Then create a regular skirt, like you have planned in the beggining, it was nice.

Regards.

Posted: 24 Jan 2007, 22:18
by mangamaniac
Ok, I'll try my best :wink:

Posted: 26 Jan 2007, 12:50
by Pauan
mangamaniac wrote:I think a brown skirt looks too dark, so i tried a light brown version, but it looks like yellow
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This is the original blue skirt with a green strip
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and last but not least a less saturated version (I think it's too much like violet)
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AIYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEE MY EYES!!!

Yeah, like Crush said, tone down the saturation. :) I love the concept, but the saturation and colors need work. I'm sure brown would work fine as long as you used proper shading, highlights, and complementary colors. :)

Posted: 26 Jan 2007, 23:27
by Tarm
I have a question. What environment were you thinking of when you created the clothes?
I think that's important regarding the colours.