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[WIP] > [FND] Quest Rossy
Posted: 20 Apr 2011, 15:42
by Dark_Mag
hello everyone,
While leveling on own server i found some problems with getting level in Hurnscald, that's why i decided to create small quest about small girl and her mum.
quest was tested and worked for me properly.
cheers, dark
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offtopic: it was the first script created in TEditor
Re: [WIP] Quest Rossy
Posted: 20 Apr 2011, 19:35
by lien
hello Dark_Mag,
the script looks cool expect a mistake at line 15
seas slimes not see slimes

and yes it's true there are some seas slimes in 18-1
By the way, nice choose of map: there are not lots of NPC there, that would make the places less 'empty'.
Lien ...
/me is testing TEditor

Re: [WIP] Quest Rossy
Posted: 21 Apr 2011, 01:10
by knight
i know i don't understand programming languages, but i think there's something wrong about your English..
mes "\"Can you help me? My water has ended and I can't go.\"";
my water has ended? would it be better if "can you help me? i ran out of water and i can't go."?
but that's what i think. let me know if i am wrong

Re: [WIP] Quest Rossy
Posted: 21 Apr 2011, 06:44
by Wombat
Many of our contributors don't speak native English language and I'd welcome more spellchecking efforts from those that do and are interested in helping NPC development.
Re: [WIP] Quest Rossy
Posted: 21 Apr 2011, 07:23
by Crush
Wombat wrote:Many of our contributors don't speak native English language and I'd welcome more spellchecking efforts from those that do and are interested in helping NPC development.
I think it wouldn't hurt to actively search for a spelling and grammar checker in the community. There surely are some native english speakers with halfway decent grades in english but no other relevant skills who would like to contribute to TMW.
Where is a grammar nazi when you need one?
Re: [WIP] Quest Rossy
Posted: 21 Apr 2011, 12:55
by Kandiman
Wombat wrote:Many of our contributors don't speak native English language and I'd welcome more spellchecking efforts from those that do and are interested in helping NPC development.
I have been a little pressed with real life concerns lately, but this has been my main focus in past efforts, and I will continue to check available scripts as time allows. In most cases, I try to stick as closely to the original as possible and use typical day-to-day speech styles instead of strict grammar rules.
I've attached a slightly updated version of the script for this quest including a couple spelling/grammar changes and a corrected call in one of the menus.
Re: [WIP] Quest Rossy
Posted: 21 Apr 2011, 13:06
by Dark_Mag
Kandiman wrote:Wombat wrote:Many of our contributors don't speak native English language and I'd welcome more spellchecking efforts from those that do and are interested in helping NPC development.
I have been a little pressed with real life concerns lately, but this has been my main focus in past efforts, and I will continue to check available scripts as time allows. In most cases, I try to stick as closely to the original as possible and use typical day-to-day speech styles instead of strict grammar rules.
I've attached a slightly updated version of the script for this quest including a couple spelling/grammar changes and a corrected call in one of the menus.
The attachment rossy.txt is no longer available
thank you Kandiman! it looks better now i think!
anyway, added seas slimes instead of see slimes
cheers, dark
Re: [WIP] > [FND] Quest Rossy
Posted: 28 Apr 2011, 04:37
by skandarv
Hm..just made slight changes in the grammar again[I'm no good at scripting..grammar is something I know reasonably anyhow]
Line 15 :- Changed "These seas slimes" to "Those sea slimes"
Those are about all I could find..
Cheers!

Re: [WIP] > [FND] Quest Rossy
Posted: 03 May 2011, 13:09
by yubabax116
Looks good to me

Re: [WIP] > [FND] Quest Rossy
Posted: 03 May 2011, 14:10
by Dark_Mag
ok, thanks, i've uploaded it to my git serverdata
cheers, dark