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New NPC [FND] & [wip]

Posted: 01 Oct 2011, 15:29
by meway
Irukard I used your tags from http://forums.themanaworld.org/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=8568
I hope you don't mind.

Re: New NPC [FND]

Posted: 01 Oct 2011, 18:17
by Reid
What is it?

It doesn't got any shape, any texture exept an etra dithering on the right side and.. why did you greyscaled it?
Oh, and why this dark outline on his head?

And light direction is wrong D:

Re: New NPC [FND]

Posted: 01 Oct 2011, 23:08
by enchilado
Everything that Reid said. I wouldn't consider this quite finished.

Tags like this will not be used for NPCs, but take note anyway that the font you are supposed to use for them is Silkscreen.

Re: New NPC [FND]

Posted: 02 Oct 2011, 16:48
by meway
small update still updating

Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]

Posted: 02 Oct 2011, 17:35
by Alige
Starting to get better but I don't think the flashy blue is a good choice. I think that this NPC first needs a more human flesh color, he looks like a man cutten from a black & white photo. Furthermore, the main color of this NPC should turn around brown, well that is pretty what I think except its cape, it really needs to stick out behind his back because at the moment, it doesn't seem it is really a cap.

Hope I helped,
Ali-G

Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]

Posted: 02 Oct 2011, 17:43
by meway
Ali-G wrote:Starting to get better but I don't think the flashy blue is a good choice. I think that this NPC first needs a more human flesh color, he looks like a man cutten from a black & white photo. Furthermore, the main color of this NPC should turn around brown, well that is pretty what I think except its cape, it really needs to stick out behind his back because at the moment, it doesn't seem it is really a cap.

Hope I helped,
Ali-G
First... read my signature.
"I think that this NPC first needs a more flesh color"
He has a mask on and it is still being worked on.
except its cape, it really needs to stick out behind his back because at the moment, it doesn't seem it is really a cap.

seems you could tell it was a cape... enough said.

Ali-G I'm not looking for suggestions. (telling you this not trying to be a dick)

Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]

Posted: 04 Oct 2011, 01:28
by meway
Update

Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]

Posted: 04 Oct 2011, 08:19
by Reid
meway wrote:Update
The mask isn't visible enought

Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]

Posted: 04 Oct 2011, 10:18
by meway
feel free to alter it.

Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]

Posted: 04 Oct 2011, 17:05
by ChefChelios
meway wrote:feel free to alter it.

Its your npc! Do the job yourself or stop posting updates if you dont wanting suggestions... Like me xD damn englisch.. I hate it xDDD

Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]

Posted: 04 Oct 2011, 17:07
by meway
I post to provide not satisfy :P

Re: New NPC [FND] & [wip]

Posted: 04 Oct 2011, 18:11
by Reid
I just point the thing that you could improuve, isn't that the job of a graphics dev forum?I don't give a cookie if you do them or not, and don't ask me to touch at that ^^ My answer will always be a no.