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Hello,

i post a wip attempt of a beret, it lacks of dead frame and icon, i will make future modifications, of course the colors are not the best.
Comments and critiques are welcome.

nice var great idea!

Thats awesome I love it ,

Most people on here as i have Noticed wont reply if they cant be a little negitive ,

No news is sometimes good news.

Pixiebobs wrote:Thats awesome I love it ,

Most people on here as i have Noticed wont reply if they cant be a little negitive ,

No news is sometimes good news.

It isn't about being negative, the process of art criticism is necessary to put out more consistent pixel art for The Mana World. True, some people like to rub it in or take criticism far beyond a pro-active level, but art needs to be criticized to guide the artist towards meeting our guidelines.

This is much better done and understood on trello than this forum.

It needs antenna
I like better the side one.
Backside view from side one is a little flat though near the hair.
If it would be dyable it would be even more awesome

Hope this helps.

Here's an update of the side version beret, with the outline and dyable this time.

2 versions;

- with a sort of pom pom, i tried to add the "antenna", i achieved nothing good basically because i have no idea how to draw it there, but it seems that could be nice with the pom pom (with the right position and prospective of course...)

- with more colors.
i tried to draw the icon too but i didnt achieve anything that could be good.
Derpella i thought to do both versions, the side one and the straight one, maybe with and without pom pom... As i said, for the antenna, nothing good so far thank you for the tip, though

Ali-G thank you for the idea, actually my aim is to draw something without the visor, like this:

http://media4.onsugar.com/files/2011/04 ... -Beret.jpg
http://a1reproductions.com/self-portrai ... -monet.jpg
http://www.mulherbeleza.com.br/wp-conte ... 76x250.jpg

which also fixes a little the grown hair hat issue (i mean when the hair is visible over the hat) that is still present, very few hair styles are affected (i counted only 2 so far....), but i cannot make the hat too big, otherwise, the size will be greater than the head that will make it, weird.

i'm not going to post the spritesheet version yet, since it's still just a wip.

var wrote:which also fixes a little the grown hair hat issue (i mean when the hair is visible over the hat) that is still present, very few hair styles are affected (i counted only 2 so far....), but i cannot make the hat too big, otherwise, the size will be greater than the head that will make it, weird.

Please don't worry about the hair going through the hats, something is being worked on about that, thanks to Bertram.

var wrote:i'm not going to post the spritesheet version yet, since it's still just a wip.

Keep it up, it is great! About the color, try keeping a single color, I don't think having a dyable beret is a good idea but that is only my personal opinion.

Regards,
Ali-G

I think it should be dyable to be honest, will be nice trying other colors.

Regards,

var, I've added you to the team. This beret is really awesome and I hope to see it in game. Var, if you need help figuring out how to use trello, PM me. You also have "pixel artist" status.