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Clothes: Green pants [Male] - Finished

Post by BadMrBox » Mon Jul 03, 2006 2:38 am

Here is a screenshot on some pants I'm making, tight green pants with a belt. Would fit to get in a forest area I guess. Tell me what you think.
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Post by ElvenProgrammer » Mon Jul 03, 2006 1:14 pm

I'll never wear extra saturated tight pants, but they're ok I think.
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Post by Tarm » Mon Jul 03, 2006 1:30 pm

They're not bad.Maybe a little short but nothing I want to complain about really.
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Post by Modanung » Mon Jul 03, 2006 1:52 pm

I think they're over-saturated but the brightness-difference is too low; the border is too bright compared to the brightest colour used.
Also the buckle is too yellow instead of gold/copper/brass/bronze. Too saturated and too single coloured (no highlights or shading).

But keep up the good work. :)
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Post by BadMrBox » Mon Jul 03, 2006 7:09 pm

I'll do something about that and maybe lenghten them one pixel?
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Post by Tarm » Mon Jul 03, 2006 8:14 pm

Sounds good to me. :)
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Post by BadMrBox » Mon Jul 03, 2006 10:40 pm

Remade the pants a bit, tell me what you think about version 1.1.
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Post by Crush » Tue Jul 04, 2006 12:08 am

the shading is much better. but somehow it still looks a bit plain. how about accentuating the knee a bit or adding some noise?
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Post by BadMrBox » Tue Jul 04, 2006 12:10 am

I'll see what I can do about it :).
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Post by Modanung » Tue Jul 04, 2006 12:58 am

Yea and it still is really green... try decreasing the saturation a bit.
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Post by BadMrBox » Tue Jul 04, 2006 2:09 am

You mean something like this Modanung? Might have darkened it a bit to much.
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Post by ElvenProgrammer » Tue Jul 04, 2006 7:55 am

Way better
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Post by BadMrBox » Tue Jul 04, 2006 8:41 am

Heh, I only darkened it 30(!)% :shock: . I'll keep that way and finish the whole set :)
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Post by Tarm » Tue Jul 04, 2006 10:40 am

No wait!I think you need to do something about the buckle so it's more visible.Try silver like you mentioned to me. :)
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Post by BadMrBox » Tue Jul 04, 2006 1:17 pm

The buckle might seem a little bit to dark in the last image but that is just only because it got caught in my darkening box. I dunno I like gold/yellow for the buckle, I shall try to color it somewhat between version 1.1 and 1.0 and if I fail to make that good, It'll be silver.
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