A girl in a dress

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A girl in a dress

Post by Luneenia » 30 Aug 2006, 01:40

plain and simple. I'll make it better after I get opinions. Feel free to bash it all you want...just be a little gentle...its my first sprite

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Post by Tarm » 30 Aug 2006, 01:57

Hm.I think it looks like a man in a dress.You might want to give her bosom and some curves or something.Maybe a little more colours, it's a little to gray.Bright colours make it more feminine.Otherwise it's ok. :)
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Post by Luneenia » 30 Aug 2006, 03:02

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better?
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Post by Tarm » 30 Aug 2006, 03:21

Much better.Any possibility to tone down the masculine shoulders?
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Post by Luneenia » 30 Aug 2006, 04:28

I'll try to make her more delicate. I'll post the product tomorrow, right now, I'm going to bed...thanks for all the comments!
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Post by Crush » 30 Aug 2006, 14:07

how about adding some folds on the skirt like it is done on some of the female npc's?
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Post by Luneenia » 30 Aug 2006, 22:30

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alright...She's more delicate and has folds. Any other features I should improve before I continue?
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Post by Matt » 30 Aug 2006, 22:32

Very nice, but...


Her boobs are smaller than her eyes oO
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Post by Tarm » 30 Aug 2006, 23:06

Is it me or is her arms a little to short?Im not sure but I think something looks strange with her arms.
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Post by Luneenia » 31 Aug 2006, 01:12

i made them 'delicate'
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Post by Tarm » 31 Aug 2006, 01:42

Yeah.They're much better now when they're not as "bulging". :)

Hmmm.The strange feeling I get might have to do with that it looks to me as if the left arm is shorter than the right.Is she resting her hand on her hip?

This is a minor thing.It might as well be me needing new glasses. :)
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Post by LadyMarie27 » 31 Aug 2006, 09:53

Tarm wrote:Is it me or is her arms a little to short?Im not sure but I think something looks strange with her arms.
No, you gotta imagine that girl as a walking one, so her arms are fine. And as you see the arms are ending at the pelvis which means its correct.
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Post by Tarm » 31 Aug 2006, 15:53

Ahh.Walking.Now I see it. :)

Matt.Size isnt everything.Shape on the other hand. ;)

I dont have any more suggestions at the moment.Anyone?
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