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Post by Siryu » Sat Oct 27, 2007 9:25 pm

this is a topic that i use for post my graphic, use this material if you need :)

this is my first set

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Post by Arenlor » Sun Oct 28, 2007 12:35 am

A few comments, first you should check out the other posts for items, see how they put them on the people (check out the kilt topic it's a really good example of what they'll need.) Secondly, on the horned one, on the side views the horns only go up to the top of the helmet while the other views show it going above the helmet.
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Post by Siryu » Sun Oct 28, 2007 10:40 am

thanks for you help

this is custom helmets :)

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this is examples of my helmet

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Post by Crush » Sun Oct 28, 2007 1:28 pm

The horns in the sideview still look strange. The outline is extremely blurred. What did you do with it?
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Post by AxlTrozz » Sun Oct 28, 2007 1:32 pm

It looks good, just try to fix the sideviews may be with a lighter color in the horns outline, and not too rounded...IMHO
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Post by Siryu » Mon Oct 29, 2007 8:15 am

i have modified the helmet

like there ?

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tell me your opinion :o
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Post by Crush » Mon Oct 29, 2007 3:17 pm

looks fine now.
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Post by Siryu » Mon Oct 29, 2007 6:53 pm

i have same problem with this helmet

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i can change the template dimension ?
because the third sprite of this helmet don't enter in the standard template of game.
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Post by Crush » Mon Oct 29, 2007 7:11 pm

Yes, you can use a larger framesize when you want to. You just have to modify the .xml file that defines the animation to use a larger frame size.
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Post by Siryu » Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:10 pm

this is my ultimate centurion's helmet

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how is it? :)
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Post by AxlTrozz » Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:36 pm

I recommend you:

* Give more texture to the red thing on top
* Fix the light source to southwest
* The pole on top it doesn't match front view with sideways view (it seems to be wider from the side)
* Same thing with the lines on the side, they are wider from back view and thinner from sideways

Last one, please don't use "ultimate" in the name :wink:
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Post by Blamoo » Tue Oct 30, 2007 7:05 pm

Siryu wrote:this is my ultimate centurion's helmet

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how is it? :)
that thing between eyes is ugly...
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Post by ElvenProgrammer » Tue Oct 30, 2007 8:25 pm

I can see very nice pieces in this thread
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Post by Rotonen » Wed Oct 31, 2007 7:47 am

Seeing minor issues:

1) Dark outlines (green helmet / hat / whatever example). This just makes the piece not fit the world.

2) There is something about the shine on the metal surfaces which does not fit in my opinion. Sorry for not being able to be more specific. You do not have to agree with me on this one and perhaps someone else can pinpoint the issue or convince me otherwise. Matters of perception are really delicate. Pixel graphics only emphasize this aspect.

3) It's going to be living hell to animate the fluffy tail and make on the centurion helmet design.

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