Hello Everyone,
Everybody has those days when you feel stressed out and didn't have the greatest day of you life.
I had one of those days today and this is why I thought of this to release stress in a way others and
myself might enjoy.(Just for the record a poem doesn't have to rhyme.)
Please write freely and relax and also comment on what the poems mean.
This is my own poem, Night Sky.
Dark night though so bright.
With an amazing gaze I see the bright moon that glows and brings beauty beautifully.
The stars have a magical spark each different each unique in the brightly night sky.
You dance on the nightly sky, so lightly you touch a softness of utter happiness.
I love the brightly lit light in the night and then I say good-night at every night.
Cherish every night like your last for every night is special for not everything stays like always.
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The truth is that no poet ever knows what he is writing about...
Words are imperfect.
Too imperfect to
Describe.
Imperfection of air
Imperfection of love
Imperfection
Lives in us.
It craves to consume us transparently...
Yet...
Words are created in a perfect trance...
Named a poet.
An acrobat balancing on the border of daub.
Regards.
Words are imperfect.
Too imperfect to
Describe.
Imperfection of air
Imperfection of love
Imperfection
Lives in us.
It craves to consume us transparently...
Yet...
Words are created in a perfect trance...
Named a poet.
An acrobat balancing on the border of daub.
Regards.
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Platyna I think your poem was so deep and it was true.
And your the only one who brother to make a poem as nicely put as that.
I love your poem and hopefully I'll get more posts on my forum, for I love to read poetry.
And your the only one who brother to make a poem as nicely put as that.
I love your poem and hopefully I'll get more posts on my forum, for I love to read poetry.
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Where is my soul placed?
The soul is my fortress
It's purpose is to strengthen me
The soul is an invincible positive invisible energy
That will always be constant
The soul is the experiences bank
That is always open to reflect on
Soul
Where are you, my faithful esquire?
My personality arose from your hand
I can't touch you, nor see.
Maybe I should consider you as monism
An entwined soul and body
You are me and I am you
We are one and the same
I am sitting here and writing about you
And you at the same time
Are you in my head?
Are you the one that controls me?
If I get life from you, and you from me
Do you then hide in my hearth?
The place where I get my life energy from
And if that is true, do you then die with me, when I pass on?
Or do we follow each other out of the empty shell?
Where are you? You are me, you are here!
// GonzoDark
The soul is my fortress
It's purpose is to strengthen me
The soul is an invincible positive invisible energy
That will always be constant
The soul is the experiences bank
That is always open to reflect on
Soul
Where are you, my faithful esquire?
My personality arose from your hand
I can't touch you, nor see.
Maybe I should consider you as monism
An entwined soul and body
You are me and I am you
We are one and the same
I am sitting here and writing about you
And you at the same time
Are you in my head?
Are you the one that controls me?
If I get life from you, and you from me
Do you then hide in my hearth?
The place where I get my life energy from
And if that is true, do you then die with me, when I pass on?
Or do we follow each other out of the empty shell?
Where are you? You are me, you are here!
// GonzoDark
IchigoBlack (86) a.k.a GonzoDark (80) || HolyManaClan
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Part Of My Soul
On September 29th our souls did meet, the Lord blessed me with a feeling so deep. She took my heart into to her hands and took me off to an angelic land; I swear I could have not been happier than I was until sadness took me up in the form of a flood. I was washed to confusion, my heart bursted with rage like an animal trapped in a small cage. I don’t know where I am, its cold and dark my feelings so far apart. I climbed the walls of despair and picked up a scent in the air, it was the scent of my long lost prayer, It is my rope and my strength, its everything that places the bad beneath. It picked me up and separated my pain, and knew my feelings for her was not in vane.
Poem to my now fiance
On September 29th our souls did meet, the Lord blessed me with a feeling so deep. She took my heart into to her hands and took me off to an angelic land; I swear I could have not been happier than I was until sadness took me up in the form of a flood. I was washed to confusion, my heart bursted with rage like an animal trapped in a small cage. I don’t know where I am, its cold and dark my feelings so far apart. I climbed the walls of despair and picked up a scent in the air, it was the scent of my long lost prayer, It is my rope and my strength, its everything that places the bad beneath. It picked me up and separated my pain, and knew my feelings for her was not in vane.
Poem to my now fiance
Landon
"Life is like one big screwed up Merry-Go-Round, I get thrown off but I get right back on"
"Life is like one big screwed up Merry-Go-Round, I get thrown off but I get right back on"
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*Clap Clap* 
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I'm writing this poem because I this is the worst day of my life
Life is a black hole sucking happiness away.
Excitement turned to anger and hope turned into hopelessness.
Life sucks the end.
Life is a black hole sucking happiness away.
Excitement turned to anger and hope turned into hopelessness.
Life sucks the end.
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Light possessed by darkness
A shadow that stretches
An object that rolls and shrinks
Dust that bites on
A clock that rings
A feeling of relaxation
It gets dark
Everything goes to the memories bank
And it all ends
// GonzoDark
A shadow that stretches
An object that rolls and shrinks
Dust that bites on
A clock that rings
A feeling of relaxation
It gets dark
Everything goes to the memories bank
And it all ends
// GonzoDark
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I'm really good at writing those kind of poems.Dimond wrote:I'm writing this poem because I this is the worst day of my life
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But, I'm in a better mood, so no need for poems anymore.
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Like a touched rose
Love makes you addicted
Hurts you when you don't get enough
Gives you a satisfied rush when you receive it
Love knocks out all the senses
And makes you only experience it
Love is like a rose floating on water
Beautiful to look at
But if you touch it, it stabs you, and it sinks
And then you are hurt and you lost the one thing you where after
// GonzoDark
Love makes you addicted
Hurts you when you don't get enough
Gives you a satisfied rush when you receive it
Love knocks out all the senses
And makes you only experience it
Love is like a rose floating on water
Beautiful to look at
But if you touch it, it stabs you, and it sinks
And then you are hurt and you lost the one thing you where after
// GonzoDark
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*Sniff* That was so beautiful! 
Thank you for your poems it touched my soul!
Thank you for your poems it touched my soul!
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This is my poem called "Confused"
The emotion of confusing is in your path no doubt about that.
It starts conflicts it starts to make you mad.
People don't think confusing is a looming shadow in life.
It's more likely they are thinking of death as the shadow tonight.
Confusing it is for confused is when it has happened in the cruel life.
You can't stop it you can't know when it will happen.
It starts conflicts even wars just a little confusing things go wrong.
The emotion of confusing is hard to explain, but this is one way.
That's all I have to say.
The emotion of confusing is in your path no doubt about that.
It starts conflicts it starts to make you mad.
People don't think confusing is a looming shadow in life.
It's more likely they are thinking of death as the shadow tonight.
Confusing it is for confused is when it has happened in the cruel life.
You can't stop it you can't know when it will happen.
It starts conflicts even wars just a little confusing things go wrong.
The emotion of confusing is hard to explain, but this is one way.
That's all I have to say.
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The sky ship
The sky ship lets its long veins rush through the cloud mass, and allows the ship to glide forward as light as a feather towards the future.
The empty space above throws stars past me, and in between those stars lays a dream of a perfect life with her by my side.
Will I ever get to show her my flame, my Olympic fire, my desire for more than just a simple friendship?
I suddenly feel a divine warmth, a soft grasp of love that spreads throughout my entire body, at last is she mine.
An equivocal feeling spreads in my stomach, is this, the sign I have been looking for since the dawn of time?
I ignore for a while her eyes that have feel on my face, that observe every move I make.
I should see her as a friend, but I see her as my one and everything, why does Amor shot me in the chest all the time?
Will a though get better if two people share it? And do I think the same thing as you do?
Suddenly the bottom falls out, we both fall through the haze and the only thing that holds us together is our hand tied together.
The wind is buzzing in my ears, our clothes flaps load, and my eyewash is blown away, as fast as it is coming out.
I feel her arms around my body, and at last I felt that we where both hugging each other.
The winds howling stopped, the noise from our clothes stopped, and I heard her whisper into my ear "I have always loved you".
// GonzoDark
The sky ship lets its long veins rush through the cloud mass, and allows the ship to glide forward as light as a feather towards the future.
The empty space above throws stars past me, and in between those stars lays a dream of a perfect life with her by my side.
Will I ever get to show her my flame, my Olympic fire, my desire for more than just a simple friendship?
I suddenly feel a divine warmth, a soft grasp of love that spreads throughout my entire body, at last is she mine.
An equivocal feeling spreads in my stomach, is this, the sign I have been looking for since the dawn of time?
I ignore for a while her eyes that have feel on my face, that observe every move I make.
I should see her as a friend, but I see her as my one and everything, why does Amor shot me in the chest all the time?
Will a though get better if two people share it? And do I think the same thing as you do?
Suddenly the bottom falls out, we both fall through the haze and the only thing that holds us together is our hand tied together.
The wind is buzzing in my ears, our clothes flaps load, and my eyewash is blown away, as fast as it is coming out.
I feel her arms around my body, and at last I felt that we where both hugging each other.
The winds howling stopped, the noise from our clothes stopped, and I heard her whisper into my ear "I have always loved you".
// GonzoDark
IchigoBlack (86) a.k.a GonzoDark (80) || HolyManaClan
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I was on a walk with the dogs and thinking about my tmw friends and this thread when I mentally composed this one. So I dedicate it to you. 
It's about walking in the forest in the late spring time, with a touch of childhood or childlike mind.
Between spring and summer
discovering the world
all those little creatures
please be careful
now it's clear though
it's been raining so
they're everywhere now
don't want to step on them but
they're everywhere 'cause
it's been raining but
now it's clear so
please be careful
all those little creatures
discovering the world
It's about walking in the forest in the late spring time, with a touch of childhood or childlike mind.Between spring and summer
discovering the world
all those little creatures
please be careful
now it's clear though
it's been raining so
they're everywhere now
don't want to step on them but
they're everywhere 'cause
it's been raining but
now it's clear so
please be careful
all those little creatures
discovering the world
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*Claps and cheers*