[REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Post by Seradest » 14 Mar 2009, 19:24

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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Post by kickinyourface » 15 Mar 2009, 11:02

Seradest wrote:An here the first Proto of the Pineapple:

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and here V2
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IMO u should just do a color which is brighter than the first and darker than the second one but it's already a nice work ;)

EDIT: the second version of the fishbone looks better IMO ;)
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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Post by Seradest » 15 Mar 2009, 12:33

kickinyourface wrote:
Seradest wrote:An here the first Proto of the Pineapple:

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and here V2
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IMO u should just do a color which is brighter than the first and darker than the second one but it's already a nice work ;)

EDIT: the second version of the fishbone looks better IMO ;)
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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Post by Rotonen » 15 Mar 2009, 12:43

The onigiri is suffering from your basic angular approach: straight outlines are unnatural. (Especially your tendency for 45 degree angle approximations is something you should work yourself out of.)

In the pineapple you're trying to force too much detail into that tiny space of 1024 pixels. Perhaps making the structural details bigger, but fewer in total would help?
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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Post by Seradest » 15 Mar 2009, 13:36

Rotonen wrote:The onigiri is suffering from your basic angular approach: straight outlines are unnatural. (Especially your tendency for 45 degree angle approximations is something you should work yourself out of.)

In the pineapple you're trying to force too much detail into that tiny space of 1024 pixels. Perhaps making the structural details bigger, but fewer in total would help?
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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Post by Goku » 16 Mar 2009, 22:23

Less detail, but with the few left make them stand out.
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Post by Goku » 16 Mar 2009, 22:53

Pineapple V4? :P
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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Post by EJlol » 16 Mar 2009, 23:11

It's still improving, keep it up :wink:
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Post by Fother » 17 Mar 2009, 06:14

Seradest wrote:Image

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I have a flopping fish mob (a fish out of water that's flopping around) about that size I've been working on, and that fish bone is definitely giving me some ideas on it :D. Your great!
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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Post by Seradest » 17 Mar 2009, 08:15

Fother J wrote:
Seradest wrote:Image

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I have a flopping fish mob (a fish out of water that's flopping around) about that size I've been working on, and that fish bone is definitely giving me some ideas on it :D. Your great!
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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Post by Seradest » 25 Mar 2009, 16:23

I will make:

A potato
A cuke
A broccoli
A aubergine

Have anyone any ideas ?
i will make the potato in a half.
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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Post by skipy » 25 Mar 2009, 20:59

Seradest wrote:I will make:

A potato
A cuke
A broccoli
A aubergine

Have anyone any ideas ?
i will make the potato in a half.



the pineapple looks really good. suggestions - corn, tomato, pumpkin, corn, banana, corn.

its what i think

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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Post by Jaxad0127 » 25 Mar 2009, 21:29

skipy wrote:corn, tomato, pumpkin, corn, banana, corn
He already made those.
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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Post by Seradest » 28 Mar 2009, 21:05

my samples for the pixel arts

A potato (i use a dirty potato)
http://img.alibaba.com/photo/10984603/F ... kistan.jpg

A cuke (i use the big )
http://honjii.files.wordpress.com/2008/ ... =267&h=432

A broccoli
http://www.worldcommunitycookbook.org/s ... occoli.jpg

A aubergine
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/c ... ergine.jpg

Its ok i make pixel art from they its not ,then say it.
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Re: [REQ] Fruits / vegetables / etc.

Post by Seradest » 29 Mar 2009, 00:02

Ok done ^^

A potato (i use a dirty potato)
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A cuke (i use the big )
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A broccoli
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A aubergine
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