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I think I still like Fother's design best, but I'm not sure how it would go as a login screen...

~I might try my hand at one.
Enchilado

Let's not get ahead of ourselves here. Almost no finished designs so far, just a lot of potential in the air.

800x600 is quite big as to add a collage of multiple representative images from game.
Im trying to do a collage with the main NPCs, nature landscapes and monsters combined. At moment I had draw the half part wich includes forest/city stuff. On the other half part I want to add desert/sea/ice stuff and finally put some monsters on perspective.

Incompleted Sketch:
http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/7210/underco.png
(as image is too big, i just leave the link there)

I put pateames sketch together with the frame (a quick version, not realy good yet):

Post #70 Garbage

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/7621 ... lpaper.png

i don't like that logo is on the 4 sides of login wallpaper

Mpa4Hu wrote:i don't like that logo is on the 4 sides of login wallpaper

Your opinion does not matter here. Have a nice day.

(Always try to come up with a reason for your opinion, this is GFX dev after all. Trying to be helpful is nice.)

still needs work

I like pateame's and Spit23s version!

Spits23s idea is great and you can put more detail into it, but it definately needs more work, e.g. so that you can't see that it was photoshopped together

pateams way is nice cause it stand for the variety of the tmw project, but it needs a lesser "pixel" look and you should redraw the desert building.

way to go you too!

Sketch II: Landscape with sky and mountains. Unfinished.

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/7621 ... lpaper.png

I really like it Pateame. All different areas of tmw put together nicely, shows the player a glimpse of the world they are about to enter.

Patame I like the new version very much. However, I feel that the foreshortening on the road should be fixed. Currently the road stays really wide as it goes back into the distance. However, judging from the scale of the desert buildings/waterfall it goes back quite far into the distance. Therefore the road should get narrower and narrower as it goes off into the distance. It should only be a third or fourth of its width by the time it gets to the waterfall.

Your opinion does not matter here. Have a nice day.

(Always try to come up with a reason for your opinion, this is GFX dev after all. Trying to be helpful is nice.)

Hopefully this opinion and reasoning counts as helpful advice.

Your composition is far to cluttered, also I think you guys should start from starch and take a more painterly approach and think more along the lines of drawing a good outline first (once you have your outline keep it on a different layer while painting it)

or rather than painterly you might try for a clean vector look

something like this idk what will go in the big blank space yet but :/

a map or spellbook