[REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 10 Sep 2008, 20:09
We need a better image for Lora Tay, the seamstress NPC. She's a middle-aged woman and a great seamstress. 
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[REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 11 Sep 2008, 19:20
How's this?
Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 11 Sep 2008, 19:30
The skirt is OK but the top accentuates the breast too much.
Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 11 Sep 2008, 20:58
I like her hair and the skirt, but the blouse/shirt could be better, I think.
Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 13 Sep 2008, 05:46
Here she is:
Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 15 Sep 2008, 07:33
Definitely better, but I still see a bit too much saturation on the skirt.kr0n05931 wrote:Here she is:
Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 17 Sep 2008, 03:57
I love her clothes, but I think the hair style doesn't seem to go too well with them, IMO.
How about long curly hair?
How about long curly hair?
Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 17 Sep 2008, 04:11
That doesn't fit her personality too well. I think the clothing colors are still off, and the dress style could be changed a bit: shorter and less flowing.
Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 20 Sep 2008, 20:28
Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 20 Sep 2008, 21:49
I had a little crack at our Seamstress as well....
//Kronos's edit was harmed in the process
//Kronos's edit was harmed in the process
Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 20 Sep 2008, 22:05
I still think her clothing could use some work. Less dressy. maybe some cloth in her hand.
Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 21 Sep 2008, 00:45
I think you've chosen a wrong approach to the glasses due to scale. Make them oversize for clarity.
Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 21 Sep 2008, 17:53
I think yosuhara's version of Lora Tay is nice, except that the breasts are still over-emphasized.
Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 23 Sep 2008, 06:17
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress
Posted: 30 Sep 2008, 18:01
The glasses are still a bit small and the thing over her right arm doesn't look appropriate for what she does.