[REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

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[REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

Post by Vink » 10 Sep 2008, 21:09

We need a better image for Lora Tay, the seamstress NPC. She's a middle-aged woman and a great seamstress. :)
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

Post by kr0n05931 » 11 Sep 2008, 20:20

How's this?
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

Post by Crush » 11 Sep 2008, 20:30

The skirt is OK but the top accentuates the breast too much.
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

Post by Vink » 11 Sep 2008, 21:58

I like her hair and the skirt, but the blouse/shirt could be better, I think.
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

Post by kr0n05931 » 13 Sep 2008, 06:46

Here she is:
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

Post by ElvenProgrammer » 15 Sep 2008, 08:33

kr0n05931 wrote:Here she is:
Definitely better, but I still see a bit too much saturation on the skirt.
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

Post by Dimond » 17 Sep 2008, 04:57

I love her clothes, but I think the hair style doesn't seem to go too well with them, IMO.
How about long curly hair? :o
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

Post by Jaxad0127 » 17 Sep 2008, 05:11

That doesn't fit her personality too well. I think the clothing colors are still off, and the dress style could be changed a bit: shorter and less flowing.
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

Post by kr0n05931 » 20 Sep 2008, 21:28

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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

Post by yosuhara » 20 Sep 2008, 22:49

I had a little crack at our Seamstress as well....
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

Post by Jaxad0127 » 20 Sep 2008, 23:05

I still think her clothing could use some work. Less dressy. maybe some cloth in her hand.
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

Post by Rotonen » 21 Sep 2008, 01:45

I think you've chosen a wrong approach to the glasses due to scale. Make them oversize for clarity.
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

Post by Vink » 21 Sep 2008, 18:53

I think yosuhara's version of Lora Tay is nice, except that the breasts are still over-emphasized.
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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

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Re: [REQ] NPC - the Seamstress

Post by Jaxad0127 » 30 Sep 2008, 19:01

The glasses are still a bit small and the thing over her right arm doesn't look appropriate for what she does.
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