my first art attempt

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my first art attempt

Post by raindrop » 27 Aug 2008, 22:15

I have created 2 simple icons for items just to get my feet wet. Any comments are appreciated. If, by some miracle, these are suitable for use, they are given freely to the project.

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Re: my first art attempt

Post by kr0n05931 » 27 Aug 2008, 22:17

Are those really yours? Because those come from a very strange domain name.
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Re: my first art attempt

Post by raindrop » 27 Aug 2008, 22:25

Of course they are mine. I wanted comments on my art, not my domain name.
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Re: my first art attempt

Post by EJlol » 27 Aug 2008, 22:29

They look nice but they do not fit the other icons IMO.
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Re: my first art attempt

Post by kr0n05931 » 27 Aug 2008, 22:43

Ah, was just checking after ASL tried to say a runescape hat was his. I do think they look very good, but they are a bit too photorealistic.
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Re: my first art attempt

Post by Crush » 28 Aug 2008, 00:42

Nice but definitely not TMW style.

Too many color shades and too much anti aliasing.
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Re: my first art attempt

Post by ElvenProgrammer » 28 Aug 2008, 08:28

They seem a bit blurry, try giving them a bit more contrast and sharp edges
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Re: my first art attempt

Post by Rotonen » 28 Aug 2008, 12:55

Too clinically 3D. On the chalice, it's almost like a downscaled photo.
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