New cotton long shorts!

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New cotton long shorts!

Post by LaCorde » 15 Jul 2009, 05:24

Hello all.

I have make a new jeans.The mostly players in TMW say i want this jeans.
And i have make that.You can dye that in your colour!
This jeans is how cotton shorts but longer ;).
And i will join with that in the DEV team.
I have script that for you,I show for you a picture.

JEANS FOR MALE:
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JEANS FOR FEMALE:
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PS:Im not a good painter :D
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Re: New cotton long shorts!

Post by kasra5004 » 15 Jul 2009, 06:18

U know it`s somehow like an extra color on the old ones.In some parts the color is not matched and in some other parts the color is not in the right place. And to be honest, i don`t really like it.
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Re: New cotton long shorts!

Post by LaCorde » 15 Jul 2009, 08:07

you dont really like it but maybe other players
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Re: New cotton long shorts!

Post by Enchilado! » 15 Jul 2009, 10:19

They look okay as a start, but they do need some work.
I recommend you do this:
Remove the dark line that was the bottom of the Shorts.
Give the new half a dark outline.
Use the same shading style as the old half.

Then they'll look much better.

~looks good as a start, though.
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Re: New cotton long shorts!

Post by LaCorde » 15 Jul 2009, 10:28

I cant good painting XD
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Re: New cotton long shorts!

Post by Crush » 15 Jul 2009, 17:50

When you want to be a part of the development team you have to improve your skills. But don't be afraid, we will help you as much as we can.

In this case it is too visible where you attached some new pixels to the cotton shorts graphic.
-There is still a visible line separating the new from the old part
-The new part uses different shades of grey
-The new part has a different texture and shading style
-The new part has no outline
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Re: New cotton long shorts!

Post by LaCorde » 15 Jul 2009, 18:32

OKay,I will look if I better manage it.
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Re: New cotton long shorts!

Post by Len » 15 Jul 2009, 18:45

Too many different shades of gray on the new parts of the shorts indicates you used a blur or blend tool to extend the shorts (try zooming in and using the pencil tool on 1 pixel wide)
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Re: New cotton long shorts!

Post by LaCorde » 15 Jul 2009, 19:04

Is that better?

NEW:
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OLD:
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I cant good painting,again!
Help pls XD
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Re: New cotton long shorts!

Post by Len » 15 Jul 2009, 19:25

indeed
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Re: New cotton long shorts!

Post by LaCorde » 15 Jul 2009, 21:26

OKay but i must edit the 2pictures(female&male).
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Re: New cotton long shorts!

Post by QUTA » 16 Jul 2009, 00:13

Wooow, nice.Lacorde, i need that jeans :D.I hope that is in the Server.
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Re: New cotton long shorts!

Post by LaCorde » 17 Jul 2009, 00:00

I hope that too QUTA.
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Re: New cotton long shorts!

Post by pelmeni » 19 Jul 2009, 23:15

good work LaCorde =) i like em and hope they ll be in game soon *thumbs up*
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Re: New cotton long shorts!

Post by Enchilado! » 20 Jul 2009, 03:26

Crush, that's pretty much the same thing I said, but listed nicer...

~I was working on some myself, but never got very far... you can see the thread on the forum, but that's the old version with a splayed-out bottom...
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