Snapper -- Zendet

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Snapper -- Zendet

Post by Zendet » Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:03 pm

Made this one from scratch, i think it looks less sc-fi than the last one
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Re: Snapper -- Zendet

Post by Crush » Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:36 pm

Your shading technique is a typical example of "Pillow Shading", a typical beginners mistake. I would recommend you to google for some pixel art shading tutorials to understand why this is bad and how to do it better.
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Post by Zendet » Mon Nov 02, 2009 9:39 pm

ok will do, thanks
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Post by Zendet » Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:24 pm

any off these color/shading alright?
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Re: Snapper -- Zendet

Post by Kage » Tue Nov 03, 2009 3:57 am

reminds me of pacman
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Post by Spit23 » Tue Nov 03, 2009 4:13 am

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Re: Snapper -- Zendet

Post by Crush » Tue Nov 03, 2009 8:02 am

You seem to be much more learn-willing than others, Zendet.

You shouldn't place a highlight in the upper left though, when the rest of your shading comes from the upper right.

You still need some practice and experience, but you have potential.
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