Possessed Sword Ass:PICK

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Possessed Sword Ass:PICK

Post by pick » Tue Apr 19, 2011 5:27 pm

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This is my first work for tmw.org :wink:
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This is a Samurai Sword Ass:PICK

Post by pick » Tue Apr 19, 2011 5:34 pm

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My second work for tmw.org
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Re: Possessed Sword Ass:PICK

Post by Crush » Tue Apr 19, 2011 5:37 pm

Why are you working for a domain which is available for lease or sale!?

Just kidding.

First for some technical feedback:
Item icons must be 32x32 pixels large, yours are 33x33. They also require a transparent background, not a white one. What image editor are you using?

Now for some artistic feedback:
Icon 1 lacks an outline around the hilt. Also the shading of the hilt looks off. Do you notice that the blade is lit from the upper left? The hilt should be shaded in the same way, but the light comes from the lower right.

Icon 2 has a very blurry hilt. It seems like you've used automatic resize here. This is a tool you should always avoid when creating pixel art.
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Re: Possessed Sword Ass:PICK

Post by pick » Tue Apr 19, 2011 6:10 pm

ok thanks guy :wink:
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Re: Possessed Sword Ass:PICK

Post by Alige » Tue Apr 19, 2011 6:14 pm

I am a bad pixel artist, but here is a remade version of your work. Try to improve it, I just modified some of the shading + centered it on a 32.32 pixels image with a transparent backround.

Nice try, keep it up!
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Re: Possessed Sword Ass:PICK

Post by pick » Tue Apr 19, 2011 6:15 pm

in my office dont have GIMP im use PAINT in the moment for this my Sword dont have trasparence... :P

more after i can post this correct =D
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Re: Possessed Sword Ass:PICK

Post by yourmistakes » Fri Apr 22, 2011 2:39 pm

Ass:PICK
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Re: Possessed Sword Ass:PICK

Post by yubabax116 » Fri Apr 22, 2011 2:41 pm

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